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I write all kinds of poetry that ould touch your heart..

Category
Poetry

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andrea aka drea

URL
http://www.bebo.com/yo-Queen07

Profile Created
March 2007

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  • i promise

    I promise you my heart
    I promise you my life
    I promise we'll never be apart
    I promise not to hurt you
    I promise to never make you cry
    I promise to always trust you
    I promise not to lie
    I promise you forever
    I promise you tonight
    I promise you my respect
    I promise to do things right
    I promise to always be there
    I promise until the end
    I promise to always love you
    I promise to be your best friend
    I promise you my love
    I promise you my life
    I promise this forever
    I promise our friendship is my life
    your the PEANUT to my BUTTER ,
    your the STAR to my BURST,
    your the M to my M,
    your the POP to my TART,
    your the MILKY to my WAY,
    your the FRUIT to my LOOP,
    your the MILK to my DUDS,
    your the LUCKY to my CHARMS,
    your the ICE to my CREAM,
    your the GHETTO to my BOOTY,

    but mostly....

    your the BEST to my FRIEND

    1 Comment 636 days

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5/10

i aint nah critic
its good but the poems could be longer i know the saying quality not quantity it just is too short for me but overall it is good use of literal language well done
by Lauren 71 weeks ago
sorry

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by Im Old Megg 73 weeks ago
cute...........<3

this is sooooo cute................i reallythink this izzzzz cute and nice...
by Rachael 75 weeks ago
iluvthispoemgurl

this is off da chain can u add me plez
by Lauren 81 weeks ago
hey

My name is Andrea Evans and I started writing poetry when i seen my lover. He really inspirted me to write and ive never stop. I really like this boy alot and I think about him every day in my dreams I just cant stop...
by Andrea 91 weeks ago

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  • Laydiee T Lvez Yhoo Laydiee T Lvez Yhoo

    i love ur poems chick
    'there fab
    n ur also a stunner xxxx

    19 weeks ago
  • Get Lyke Dat Gurl Ebony Get Lyke Dat Gurl Ebony

    no i aint removig her cuz datz mo friendz who eva it is dnt neva tlak 2 me no way so im str8 lol but im 4real

    47 weeks ago
  • Blue

    i love then all

    68 weeks ago
  • Im Old Megg Im Old Megg

    im really sorry love, but your english is atrocious and your poems are hardly poems just meaningless words that you threw together because they rhyme ever so slightly.

    73 weeks ago
  • luv Tesha

    Ur Poems r wack
    Worthless meanings
    They kill me inside just to read `em
    a poem is a dedication to ur mind
    Expressing urself
    C not always having to rhyme
    Just showing reassurance
    Sometimes needing help
    What is Love?
    Honestly no one Knows
    Just a feeling
    Keeping everyone who is selfish
    putting feelings on hold
    So make a little sense of ur words
    Maybe find something creative to do with ur time
    Because playing with letters to me
    is like steping on my own personal gold mine...

    73 weeks ago
  • Lonnell Lonnell

    im in this

    79 weeks ago
  • luv Reluctant Ebola Washer

    i like your page!

    81 weeks ago
  • Chris Green Chris Green

    i lyk u. do u lyk me?

    83 weeks ago
  • Mrs. Knowledge luv Mrs. Knowledge

    you was good you should try writing in a different stanza life not as much ryming and more emotion i know cause i am curently a writer myself you are great keep it up girls

    84 weeks ago
  • GoT The Hubby. GoT The Hubby.

    gurl u betta write yo poetry cuz yo life is goin good if u wanna be a poetry writer holla

    86 weeks ago
  • Miz ATL

    dat my cuzin saw us wat u can do and dont let no1 steal ur talent

    91 weeks ago
  • . .

    go gurl i hav 2 sho support cuz u my sis.

    91 weeks ago
  • . .

    it's prob. u ant it

    91 weeks ago